This review originally appeared in Critics At Large
Maggie is a very engaging character: smarter than almost all the men around her, spirited, and strong willed, if a tad naïve, with a determination to succeed “in a man’s world.” She is a math prodigy and saddled with an unusual family pedigree. Believing that both of her British parents died in a car accident when she was very small, Maggie was raised in America by her aunt Edith who works as a scientist for Wellesley College where Maggie has graduated with top marks in math. She delays her doctoral studies at MIT to go to London in 1940 to sell a house that she had recently inherited. Unable to sell it, she takes in roommates to defray the expenses, a decision that will have momentous significance as the plot unfolds. Since these novels fall within the mystery genre, it should not be a surprise that her parents are very much alive, and one of the pleasures of these books is to discover with Maggie their current identity and the pivotal role they will play in her life.
While in London, war breaks out and Maggie decides to extend her stay to do her bit for King and Country by helping the war effort. With her mathematical prowess, her extraordinary gifts for codebreaking and her fluency in German and French, Elia McNeal might have dropped Maggie into Bletchley Park as so many talented men and women were plucked from the universities to assist in breaking the German cypher code, Enigma, which, according to Churchill, shortened the war by two years. Although individuals who work at Bletchley Park enter into the series, including a spy, Elia McNeal has other plans for her heroine. Maggie finds work as a typist to the newly minted Prime Minister, Winston Churchill. Soon Maggie’s talents are spotted in the PM’s office, particularly by John Sterling, one of Churchill’s Private Secretaries. As a typist, Maggie isn’t privileged to have access to the high level security issues, but John is and he is receptive to her astonishing skills. He also knows more than he is letting on—especially about Maggie and her past. Eventually she finds that working for Churchill affords her a level of clearance she could never have imagined—and opportunities that would not have been possible at Bletchley Park. Her access to the War Rooms and a chameleon in her personal life exposes Maggie to the machinations of a menacing faction determined to inflict as much damage as it can on England.
While the Blitz pounds London with its nightly air raids, there are other sinister forces at work; the Irish Republican Army (IRA) is an active terrorist cell is engaged in espionage and sabotage throughout London and they have targeted an iconic London landmark. While everyone in the PM’s office is focused on Germany’s movements, the IRA is seemingly forgotten until Maggie sees something she believes to be a coded missive about the PM and a cathedral. Among her colleagues, initially only Sterling seems willing to listen.
—branded as Peter's Chocolate—among other luxury items taken on trays into the dining room used by the War Cabinet during the Second World War. This is not the scenario that Elia McNeal imagines but she should receive kudos for incorporating the attempt to assassinate Churchill into her novel. As for that spy at Bletchley Park (that is also a central conceit in Robert Harris’ Enigma), she was right on one account: there were no German spies there but there was a Russian spy, John Cairncross, the so-called ‘Fifth Man’ among the Cambridge spies, who jeopardized the work at Bletchley but fortunately did not inflict incalculable harm on British Intelligence in part because the enemy at this time was not the Soviet Union. The author should be acknowledged for her effort to tell a credible story.
Her second novel, Princess Elizabeth’s Spy, does not match the plausibility standard of Elia McNeal’s debut novel, but this blemish does not diminish the reader’s enjoyment. As England steels itself against German attack, Maggie Hope completes her training to become a spy for MI-5. Given her vast talents, she fully expects to be sent abroad to gather intelligence for the British front. Instead, to her great disappointment, she is dispatched to go to Windsor Castle, where Churchill believes that a serious threat exists to the members of the royal family. Having someone around Princess Elizabeth that he trusted would add another level of protection; her cover will be tutoring the young princess in math. Churchill is right; castle life quickly proves more dangerous than Maggie ever expected. When a woman turns up dead and coded British missives are found in her possession, the reader does not doubt that there is a spy at Windsor. The opening scene in neutral Portugal, wherein a powerful German official converses with the former abdicated king and his wife, who both share fascist sympathies, adds historical authenticity to the belief that there was a threat to the royal family.
|author Susan Elia MacNeal|
In His Majesty's Hope (2013), Elia McNeal has delivered on several accounts: she has written a gripping, historically grounded espionage thriller with startling revelations about Maggie Hope’s mother, who turns out to be an important character, as well as a transformation in Maggie’s character after a foray into enemy territory has stripped away her “plucky” sheen and left in its place emotional scars. The author’s piling on of coincidences, particularly around Maggie’s personal life, however, might be regarded as a blemish. As the novel opens, she is fresh from her training with the Special Operations Executive in England, and on the personal recommendation of Winston Churchill, is catapulted in 1941 into the maw of German fascist savagery. Maggie is given a new identity with a thoroughly developed backstory to go along with her clandestine mission and a cyanide pill to swallow should she fail and be apprehended.
—no doubt compounded by the unravelling of her personal relationships—due to the loss of human lives that occurred as a result of decisions she made in Germany.
She was not fully prepared for the nastier sides of being an agent in a hostile country or the depth of evil that can reside in people and these revelations have taken an emotional toll on her. Even though she made the right decisions given the high stakes, she is devastated by her capacity for ruthlessness and the consequences of some of her actions. Near the end of the novel, Maggie is approached by the head of MI-5 who tells her that she should be proud of her accomplishments instead of feeling guilty. He reveals that he has had to commit unspeakable acts— we witness one of them in Churchill’s Secretary—but they were necessary when England faced an unprecedented existential crisis. She is not convinced, feeling that she has “set aside her moral compass.” At this time there will be no special ops for her as she is dispatched to Scotland to help in the training of MI-5 operatives. Expect a street-smart, perhaps cynical or sadder, yet highly competent and more three-dimensional operative to appear in the next installment.